Feedback

1. Does the story make sense?

People didnt really understand the full storyline but they also said that they thought that worked to its advantage because as a thriller the opening 'doesnt have to/shouldnt show it all'.

2. Do the titles fit the genre?

Overall, yes, people liked the multiple fonts however the movement of the titles didnt reflect the genre as well as it could.

3. What is your favourite part of the sequence?

fuzzy screen transition, camera watching her open the door and the rave :)

4. Why is that your favourite?

it makes it seem like someone is watching her and the rave created an interesting contrast with the more sinister parts.

5. Does it look realistic?

yes, it looks very realistic and effective

6. Mark the acting ability out of 10?

24/30